[REVIEW] Runaway

Title: Runaway (completed)
Author: cutterpill☺w
Reviewer: Ms. McFartPants (Linlin Vito)

Story Title : 4/5
: It did catch my attention. And it did fit the storyline but I think you could do better.

Appearance : 8/10
: I think that the poster is cute, and the background’s also cute. The only problem is the font colors. Maybe you could edit the font colors that will match your stories.

Forewords : 7/10
: The forewords was good, and it does contain the things that the readers would need to know about the fanfic.

Plot : 12/15
: The plot was half cliche, half interesting. It contained a lot of scenes (ideas) that are too common and it was interesting because I got interested. He-he-he! ^^

Characterization : 9/10
: I did learn a lot from the characters. Like for example, I learned that main girl (Ma-chan/Mi-chan) doesn’t easily gives up. Right?

Creativity/Originality : 7/10
: I didn’t think that the story was creative but it is kinda good.

Spelling/Grammar/Vocabulary : 8/10
: I’m not that good at stories that have Japanese terms, so I’m not really sure if you used it correctly. I think you did, but there are some mistakes that are noticeable.

Flow : 7/10
: I think that the story was too fast..

Writing Style : 14/15
: Yeah, your writing style made it too easy for me to read.

Overall Enjoyment : 4/5

Total : 80/100

Bonus : 4/5

Overall Total: 84/100Title: Runaway (completed)
Author: cutterpill☺w
Reviewer: Ms. McFartPants (Linlin Vito)

Story Title : 4/5
: It did catch my attention. And it did fit the storyline but I think you could do better.

Appearance : 8/10
: I think that the poster is cute, and the background’s also cute. The only problem is the font colors. Maybe you could edit the font colors that will match your stories.

Forewords : 7/10
: The forewords was good, and it does contain the things that the readers would need to know about the fanfic.

Plot : 12/15
: The plot was half cliche, half interesting. It contained a lot of scenes (ideas) that are too common and it was interesting because I got interested. He-he-he! ^^

Characterization : 9/10
: I did learn a lot from the characters. Like for example, I learned that main girl (Ma-chan/Mi-chan) doesn’t easily gives up. Right?

Creativity/Originality : 7/10
: I didn’t think that the story was creative but it is kinda good.

Spelling/Grammar/Vocabulary : 8/10
: I’m not that good at stories that have Japanese terms, so I’m not really sure if you used it correctly. I think you did, but there are some mistakes that are noticeable.

Flow : 7/10
: I think that the story was too fast..

Writing Style : 14/15
: Yeah, your writing style made it too easy for me to read.

Overall Enjoyment : 4/5

Total : 80/100

Bonus : 4/5

Overall Total: 84/10