[REVIEW] This and That

Title: This and that
Author: cutterpillow
Fanfic URL:http://www.winglin.net/fanfic/feisu/chapter_4.shtml
Reviewer: Elena @ My Sensation

My review on THIS AND THAT.

Reviewer’s note: This review has nothing to do with any personal misunderstanding with the author or anything of that sort. This is an honest review on a fanfic. I’m seriously sorry if I was rude or harsh.

`Story Title: 4/5

*The story title seemed ordinary, but, yet interesting.
`Appearance: 6/10

*I thought this story was a simple, love story but it turned out to be a thriller story instead.
`Forewords: 5/10

*Your forewords were simple yet understandable.
`Plot: 9/15

*The plot had a cliché basis but you made it interesting in your own way.

`Characterization: 4/10

*Your characterization was poor. You need to provide more details on your characters to ensure that the readers understand the characters well.
`Creativity/Originality: 5/10

*Your story was not original but it has a certain amount of creativity in it.
`Spelling/Grammar/Vocabulary: 5/10

*Your fanfic had quite a number of spelling and grammar mistakes. Your vocabulary selection is too ordinary.
`Flow: 4/10

*Your story’s flow was totally imbalanced. It was hard for me to understand the story a little.
`Writing Style: 9/15

*Your writing style is very simple. Please try to improve it by using interesting twists in the plot and interesting words in your story.
`Overall Enjoyment: 5/5
`Total : 56/100

`Bonus: 5/5

Overall Total: 61/100